So far, so good, but I will be truthful. 'Larussi's Heartsong' currently consists of one whole sentence - and I suspect that I may have to rewrite that, having looked again at it. Everything has to begin somewhere, though, and the first steps are usually faltering ones. I cannot think of a book that I have written where the opening went on sale exactly as I first wrote it. 'Chained in Time' had its first chapter entirely rewritten after I had finished the rest of the book. The reasoning for that was very simple. When a customer is browsing for a book to buy, he or she will read the first page or two, no more. If their interest is not engaged by that time, they won't even look at the rest of the book, let alone buy it. The author has, at best, just 500 words to persuade a potential customer to part with their cash. That is why the hardest page of any book to write is Page 1. If you don't get that right, it doesn't matter how good the rest of the work is, it will be a failure.
Fear not. Page 1 of 'Larussi's Heartsong' will be fine - as will the rest of the book. It is just a question of getting it right. All being well, it should be on sale before Christmas.